Wednesday 28 September 2016

Did she surrender, did she not?

Did she surrender? Did she not?
Did she fight, for what she ought?
It had been her miss, is what they thought
Kins needed to hide faces, bad name's what she brought

A girl fond of yellows and pinks,
now seems tangled in greys
And the girl who sang all the recent hits,
seems numb, after screaming for days

Been seven months,
couldn't time help her heal?
Upsetting were their gaping faces,
couldn't they get what she would feel?

And when time seemed to pass, in vain
Begetters thought to act wise...
They shifted her to another city,
thought it would take her by surprise

Lonely, she still was,
all that shuffle pointed null,
begetters planned to get her married,
and bring back colors to life dim and dull

And proposals were sent,
no proposal was to come;
Rejection was that one word,
that would always keep her mum

Nothing felt like before, why life got so hard?
Was it her miss, as they say? She's now counted as a star...
People show their pity faces, faces do deceive
Is there any worth of candle marches, or condolences, would she receive ?

25 comments:

  1. Awesomeness reloaded bhavna ji. Keep rocking with your imaginations

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    1. Thank you so much jiju! Glad that you liked it

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  2. to be imprisoned in gray days is sad.....wishing her lots of yellow and pink freedom...beautifully put...

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    1. Thanks a lot Sumana! I'm glad that you liked this, keep reading and stay connected :)

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    1. Thank you so much that you liked it dear! Stay connected...

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  4. Love this:
    "A girl fond of yellows and pinks,
    now seems tangled in greys
    And the girl who sang all the recent hits,
    seems numb, after screaming for days"

    And I ENVY your last line. Hard stuff.

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    1. Thanks a lot Susan! Glad that you liked my work :)

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  5. I liked the lines Susan quoted, too. She is in a dilemma for sure, but I sense she is moving towards better days, with lots of pink and yellow.

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    1. Yes, thanks a lot dear! Glad that you liked it

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  6. An effulgent angle of lucid graph that is still fluctuating in its own eyes ...Viva_Neha

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    1. :) Thank you so much! Keep motivating... Glad that you liked it :)

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  7. Sometimes no matter how hard we have to fight our own way back - we wish her luck

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    1. Yes, and we have to keep moving with that note. Glad that you noticed my work! Stay connected :)

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  8. Clearly a person cannot be manipulated through a crisis like this but needs qualified professional help to find her self worth without pressure to perform. Let's hope she gets it.

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    1. Yes, surely. That is the wisest way out of such a dilemma. Thanks for noticing my work:) Stay connected!

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    1. Yes. That's quiet a naked truth. Thanks for noticing my work! Stay connected :)

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  10. Mujhe kuch samajh nahi aaya 😔

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    1. Oh ! You got to re read more and more till u get to understand finally...

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  11. Wow... your art always tells a new story that bound us to be there.

    Let's see this world with your eyes 😱 , sorry for not able to understand it for the first time 😑

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    1. Thank you so much! Hope you got it now... :)

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